Monday, November 29, 2010

The differences is tell a story you can act but if you are telling you are sitting down and read the story. Making the blogpost to my blog. Becuase it is hard for me to put a great post on my blog so I think it is the most difficult. Is to make different voice from different charters because If it is wrong we have to res star again. I am successful because I had many people help me to finish my work. I felt success to my podcast, because I had only spent few times and big effort on it. Yeah, because I had put in my expressions in my recording also I very much like my story. I enjoy when we make the podcast about storytelling because is interesting and fun. I think I am En-joyful.

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

ESL 6 Unit 1 final Project

Here is the storybird that I had make. The story called the animals and robot going to the city. The robot didn't know what is correct what is uncorrected:



This is the story about my storybird:

The humans think the robots are very kind to them. We give them many things this robots is great his name called Aek. Aek, said "this black coffee is smells nice. What can I do what can’t I do?” the robot called Aet said “How delicious is the cars yummy and I feels grateful. So the human use the road that is very high to the sky so the robot don't eat the human. Humans is crazy to make the robots and the car said," we can never been eat by the bad robot." The other car said, "Yeah." So the human teach the robots to do the right things. A boy name Chung said, "You can play with a water gun but not real gun."A robot name Pow said, "I don’t want the water gun can you give me the real gun." See it became like this kind.

A robot name Menu said, " sing is very good but I like rock song". Now the animals can go to the city and they can drive the car.

A fish name Fern, said "I don't wanted to go to the city because there will be no water at all but I can see there is a wonderful water car".
A giraffe name Ken said, "I am too tall I cannot see the down park there is a tall car". But the animal become crazy they break every thing. A bear name Ben said "I hungry I want to eat some things so I decided to eat some things I am hungry giving me the delicious food". So the human star to move there house to the forest and began with there.
Riam, "here can be a batter place to sell fun thing". See a man who called john is in the forest and he is finding an animal.

Justin, "I like this little animals but there is the large animals that I like ". Animal can drink things and they just like a human. Mad, "I like what the drink is yummy and let me felt sleep human's things". So the big animal wanted to back to there warm forest and their own home. Fal,"I wanted to go home". Some of them still wanted to live in the city so they want back and. Fern, "I wanted stay at great city". The small green robots become very kindness. Grat,"hello how are you today". See they can do things by there own they can play the soft music. Djay,"I love to play good music do you like". And fixed some shine CD that’s broken. Fixer, “I like brake some colorful CD and fixed it back do you".


Here is the video about me reading my story:




Here is my podcast I am telling my story:





Wednesday, November 10, 2010

we use google doc for brainstorming and reflection and we print out our story borad and stick on the paper and photo it. We use storybird for making story borad and we use youtube for watching how to tell a story. how do we make a blog, how to post somethings, how to post a picture, we use adding skill to add adjective, we use screen shout to take the photo of the story borad and print it out stick on paper then take a photo of them after that we write how does it feels, smells and heras and after that we go to google doc and type reflection. I think I do good at making a story borad in the Storybird because I make a fun story and it is grateful.